Only have 2 chapters at the moment- but what do you guys think?
Chapter 1
‘Bill you idiot...’ I thought to myself, zipping my leather jacket up before shoving my hands in my pockets as I walked along, head down. It was a cold night... And I’d decided to have a walk. It was one of the few times I could actually just wonder down the street without being recognised. Sure- it probably looked odd as I was wearing sunglasses in what was almost the middle of the night, but it helped me remain undetected to fans and stalkers. I sighed as I took a glimpse up the path in front of me, noticing a figure standing beside one of the shops just up ahead. I crossed the road, so I’d avoid any trouble, and sped up my pace a little. I REALLY didn’t want any trouble... And all I could feel were that guy’s eyes on me, like he was some sort of pervert. I shuddered, uncertain as to whether I’d juddered because of the cold, or the guy, and sighed again, pulling my phone slowly out of my pocket. I dialled the number I knew all too well, and pressed the little handset to my ear, listening to the dial tone before someone spoke. “Bill? What is it?”
“I’m on my way home... I’ll be back in about 10 minutes, OK?”
“You alright? You don’t sound right...”
“Well... There’s a guy...” I turned, and noticed that he had crossed the road now, and was walking only about 30 steps behind me. I sped up a little again, and noticed that he did the same. My voice lowered to a panicked whisper. “And he’s following me... I...I’m scared, Tomi...”
“Bill where are you? I’ll come and pick you up, OK?”
“I’m by the bakery... Please hurry...”
“Nothing’s gonna happen... Bill, I’ll be there soon, I promise!”
“How do you know, Tomi? Ok.... See you in a minute,” I regretfully hung up on my twin, and took a quick glimpse over my shoulder. Now the guy was just stood there, his shoulders hunched, his hands in his pockets and his head down. I sped up again, this time breaking into a run. I was aware of the running footsteps following me, and I felt a tear roll down my face as my breathing came in gasps and pants. I started praying under my breath, and clenched my fists tightly. If he dared try anything, I’d smack him in the face and run. I turned the corner, and stopped, gasping as I realised it would be a dead end. The number of times I’d walked down this street- and when I was probably in danger, I took a wrong turning.... I heard the guy behind me, and I spun around. “Why the fuck are you following me?!” I demanded, my fists now raised.
“No reason... Just following you for the sake of it.”
“That’s stupid... Now tell me... WHY?!” I shouted, closing my eyes. That was when he leapt at me, snarling loudly. I fell to the floor, that guy practically crushing me beneath him, and I started screaming as he drew his lips back, his canine’s razor sharp, his face contorted into some form of demonic grin. “NEIN!” I punched him in the face, but he just stayed there on top of me, forcing me to attempt to push him off. I punched him again, but this time he managed to grab my arm and pin it down, so now all I was doing was just feebly defending myself. I brought my knee up into his crotch, and gasped in shock as he simply laughed. Suddenly, his teeth were buried deep into my neck, and I shrieked in agony as I felt my blood pouring down my skin, my veins leaking the crimson within. “NEIN!!!” I cried, trying to push him away the best I could, the pain in my neck almost unbearable. I tried yanking my head out of his teeth, but he simply used both of his hands to hold me in place, and my body shuddered as he began lapping at my blood... He was actually drinking it... Suddenly, a car pulled up at the bottom of the alleyway, and Tom ran out of the driver’s seat, leaving the door wide open as he dragged the guy off of me. I clasped my hands to my neck, tears of pain and horror streaming down my face as my blood poured between my fingers. I screamed repeatedly, my entire body trembling almost uncontrollably, the pain in my torn neck unbearable. The guy snarled angrily at me, then Tom, then ran off into the darkness, leaving me and my twin alone...
Chapter 1
‘Bill you idiot...’ I thought to myself, zipping my leather jacket up before shoving my hands in my pockets as I walked along, head down. It was a cold night... And I’d decided to have a walk. It was one of the few times I could actually just wonder down the street without being recognised. Sure- it probably looked odd as I was wearing sunglasses in what was almost the middle of the night, but it helped me remain undetected to fans and stalkers. I sighed as I took a glimpse up the path in front of me, noticing a figure standing beside one of the shops just up ahead. I crossed the road, so I’d avoid any trouble, and sped up my pace a little. I REALLY didn’t want any trouble... And all I could feel were that guy’s eyes on me, like he was some sort of pervert. I shuddered, uncertain as to whether I’d juddered because of the cold, or the guy, and sighed again, pulling my phone slowly out of my pocket. I dialled the number I knew all too well, and pressed the little handset to my ear, listening to the dial tone before someone spoke. “Bill? What is it?”
“I’m on my way home... I’ll be back in about 10 minutes, OK?”
“You alright? You don’t sound right...”
“Well... There’s a guy...” I turned, and noticed that he had crossed the road now, and was walking only about 30 steps behind me. I sped up a little again, and noticed that he did the same. My voice lowered to a panicked whisper. “And he’s following me... I...I’m scared, Tomi...”
“Bill where are you? I’ll come and pick you up, OK?”
“I’m by the bakery... Please hurry...”
“Nothing’s gonna happen... Bill, I’ll be there soon, I promise!”
“How do you know, Tomi? Ok.... See you in a minute,” I regretfully hung up on my twin, and took a quick glimpse over my shoulder. Now the guy was just stood there, his shoulders hunched, his hands in his pockets and his head down. I sped up again, this time breaking into a run. I was aware of the running footsteps following me, and I felt a tear roll down my face as my breathing came in gasps and pants. I started praying under my breath, and clenched my fists tightly. If he dared try anything, I’d smack him in the face and run. I turned the corner, and stopped, gasping as I realised it would be a dead end. The number of times I’d walked down this street- and when I was probably in danger, I took a wrong turning.... I heard the guy behind me, and I spun around. “Why the fuck are you following me?!” I demanded, my fists now raised.
“No reason... Just following you for the sake of it.”
“That’s stupid... Now tell me... WHY?!” I shouted, closing my eyes. That was when he leapt at me, snarling loudly. I fell to the floor, that guy practically crushing me beneath him, and I started screaming as he drew his lips back, his canine’s razor sharp, his face contorted into some form of demonic grin. “NEIN!” I punched him in the face, but he just stayed there on top of me, forcing me to attempt to push him off. I punched him again, but this time he managed to grab my arm and pin it down, so now all I was doing was just feebly defending myself. I brought my knee up into his crotch, and gasped in shock as he simply laughed. Suddenly, his teeth were buried deep into my neck, and I shrieked in agony as I felt my blood pouring down my skin, my veins leaking the crimson within. “NEIN!!!” I cried, trying to push him away the best I could, the pain in my neck almost unbearable. I tried yanking my head out of his teeth, but he simply used both of his hands to hold me in place, and my body shuddered as he began lapping at my blood... He was actually drinking it... Suddenly, a car pulled up at the bottom of the alleyway, and Tom ran out of the driver’s seat, leaving the door wide open as he dragged the guy off of me. I clasped my hands to my neck, tears of pain and horror streaming down my face as my blood poured between my fingers. I screamed repeatedly, my entire body trembling almost uncontrollably, the pain in my torn neck unbearable. The guy snarled angrily at me, then Tom, then ran off into the darkness, leaving me and my twin alone...